Sports play an essential part in ones student period. It can help student stay in good shapes while studying hard, develop friendships and feel accomplished doing it.
And release student’s pressure from school works.
Doing sports can help students stay healthy and maintain a good shape. Nowadays, due to using computers too much in leisure time, a recent survey shows that over 27 percent of high school student in the United States are overweight or at the risk of overweight[1]. This is an amazing statistic that almost over 1 of four students has a problem of obesity. I think students should spend more time to exercise rather than playing online games in their leisure time. As for staying healthy, the department of health recommended that as an adult, people should spend at least 150 minutes doing moderate-intensity aerobic activity and plus doing muscle training at least 2 times a week.[2] Therefore, maybe we should work more harder on exercise to lower the statistics.
Doing sports can develop lots of friendship for doing exercise that required teamwork. (Such as basketball, football and volleyball.) By doing these events, we can always meet new people because these are the kind of sports that will always be someone playing in the gym. And the rules are universal; you can play with whoever you want in the gym. What’s more, if you were technically the leader of some club. You can know how to deal with the problem and will learn also how to manage a team. Which will be a good experience for us.
As a student, we are often overwhelmed by lots of homework and reports in daily life. And these pressures should be relieved in certain way. As for me, I will go weight training twice a week and also plays basketball, volleyball and sometimes soccer every weekend. And they are really important for me because on one hand, I think it is always helpful for me because I can feel that I’m refreshed after doing these activities. On the other hand, after the events we often go dining together which can make everyone closer to each other.
In conclusion, I think sports play a very important part of our student life. It not only makes us stay in good shape, but also can relieve our pressure of school. Thus, why not choose sports you like and started to work on it. You will feel the difference
within you!
[1] http://www.cdc.gov/mmwr/preview/mmwrhtml/mm5501a2.htm
[2] http://www.cdc.gov/physicalactivity/everyone/guidelines/adults.html
Sunday, October 18, 2009
Thursday, October 15, 2009
Outline of compare and contrast
Topic:
Campus lifestyle in Taiwan and in UIUC
Thesis statement:
Campus lifestyle not only shows how a country educates their younger generation, but also reflects a country’s culture. As an exchange student, I’ve discovered several similarity and difference in campus life between Taiwan and UIUC.
(Using point by point)
Student’s night life:
Topic sentence:
Unlike most of the university in Taiwan is in big city, UIUC locates in country sides
Supporting ideas:
UIUC is at the middle of corn field and we can find nearly everything we want on campus. In Taiwan we usually have night market where we can enjoy delicious foods and lots of entertainments just across the street of the campus.
Activity/sports:
Topic sentence:
While UIUC have clubs that mainly based on ones interests, we got lots of student associations and club which is based on department in Taiwan.
Supporting ideas:
For example, we have our own student association for mechanical engineering department, and we often held welcoming camp with other associations such as foreign language department or finance department. For sports such as basketball or volleyball, we also have our own team of each department. And then the school’s club team will hold a tournament every semester where each department compete each other.
Classes:
Topic sentence:
Unlike UIUC divides classes through weekdays, the same classes are often taught in a series in Taiwan.
Supporting ideas:
For example, ESL class of three credits will have three classes together on Monday rather than spreading out to three days a week in Taiwan. Moreover, I think students here are very active in class. They ask questions whenever they want frequently. In Taiwan, students will be really quiet through classes, only taking their notes.
Campus lifestyle in Taiwan and in UIUC
Thesis statement:
Campus lifestyle not only shows how a country educates their younger generation, but also reflects a country’s culture. As an exchange student, I’ve discovered several similarity and difference in campus life between Taiwan and UIUC.
(Using point by point)
Student’s night life:
Topic sentence:
Unlike most of the university in Taiwan is in big city, UIUC locates in country sides
Supporting ideas:
UIUC is at the middle of corn field and we can find nearly everything we want on campus. In Taiwan we usually have night market where we can enjoy delicious foods and lots of entertainments just across the street of the campus.
Activity/sports:
Topic sentence:
While UIUC have clubs that mainly based on ones interests, we got lots of student associations and club which is based on department in Taiwan.
Supporting ideas:
For example, we have our own student association for mechanical engineering department, and we often held welcoming camp with other associations such as foreign language department or finance department. For sports such as basketball or volleyball, we also have our own team of each department. And then the school’s club team will hold a tournament every semester where each department compete each other.
Classes:
Topic sentence:
Unlike UIUC divides classes through weekdays, the same classes are often taught in a series in Taiwan.
Supporting ideas:
For example, ESL class of three credits will have three classes together on Monday rather than spreading out to three days a week in Taiwan. Moreover, I think students here are very active in class. They ask questions whenever they want frequently. In Taiwan, students will be really quiet through classes, only taking their notes.
Outline of cause and effect
Thesis statement:
Academic failure in college is mainly caused by the three following factors: negative peer affection, too much freedom of college life and poor time management.
Topic sentences:
Peer affection plays an essential role in college life. You will probably become similar to who you usually get along with.
Supporting details:
Hangout with friend who lacks a passion of learning can affect ones attitude toward learning.
Topic sentence:
Lifestyle in college is extremely free. You can participate in any courses or activities you want.
Supporting details:
1. Not understanding the amount of work required or time consuming often makes students get poor performance due to insufficient preparing.
2. Participates in too much activities can also leads to poor performance on school works.
Topic sentence:
Deficiency in time management will not only affect one’s daily life, but will also result in poor performance on school works.
Supporting details:
1. Appropriate time managing is very important in college. It helps you know how much time you are spending on each activities.
Academic failure in college is mainly caused by the three following factors: negative peer affection, too much freedom of college life and poor time management.
Topic sentences:
Peer affection plays an essential role in college life. You will probably become similar to who you usually get along with.
Supporting details:
Hangout with friend who lacks a passion of learning can affect ones attitude toward learning.
Topic sentence:
Lifestyle in college is extremely free. You can participate in any courses or activities you want.
Supporting details:
1. Not understanding the amount of work required or time consuming often makes students get poor performance due to insufficient preparing.
2. Participates in too much activities can also leads to poor performance on school works.
Topic sentence:
Deficiency in time management will not only affect one’s daily life, but will also result in poor performance on school works.
Supporting details:
1. Appropriate time managing is very important in college. It helps you know how much time you are spending on each activities.
Sunday, October 4, 2009
What do you think about students having to wear school uniforms?
So far, the purpose of education is always making you into a unique individual, developing specific skills and help finding your own value through life. In this case, I think students should focus more on their school works rather than their clothing. Wearing uniforms not only makes school life more simple and organized, but also provides equality and safety among students.
Uniform, in other words, is a unified outfits that makes students looks exactly the same on the outward during school time. It may not have good looking as well as casual clothing. But it can definitely save students time from deciding what to wear or how to dress up before school. As for me, I would like to have same two suits of uniform that can bring me through the week days rather than buying five or even more different combination of casual clothing. By wearing uniform, the entire school will look more in ordered and organized rather than loud and fancy. It provides better educational atmosphere, and symbolize school spirit.[1] By satisfying these two reasons above, students can be more concentrate on their learning and mind developing, which could greatly help fulfill the purpose of education.
Furthermore, statistics has that schools having school uniform policy have seen decreased in crime rate. It was a tragedy that a few years ago in Detroit there was a boy been killed only because someone dislike his brand new, 86 dollar shoes.[2] By wearing uniform, students will be equal even they come from different economy background. They will no longer be laugh or judge at their appearance. And the focus in school will be likely more about which scientific research project are students in rather than who just got the new season, famous branded jacket. And also, students can spend money in a more efficient way such as on school fees, tuition fees or even got better nutrition if they don’t spent their money on the outfits. Nowadays, more and more schools in America now even rise funding of buying uniforms for students who can’t afford the cost.
All in all, wearing uniform keeps the campus in harmony and safe. And also makes student to develop their skills and interest of life in an atmosphere which is free from any problem other than academic accomplishments. By this policy, the purpose of education will be better fulfilled and make learning in school more positive and equal.
[1] from http://www.teachersmind.com/education.htm ---purpose of education
[2] from http://www.123helpme.com ---school uniforms.
Uniform, in other words, is a unified outfits that makes students looks exactly the same on the outward during school time. It may not have good looking as well as casual clothing. But it can definitely save students time from deciding what to wear or how to dress up before school. As for me, I would like to have same two suits of uniform that can bring me through the week days rather than buying five or even more different combination of casual clothing. By wearing uniform, the entire school will look more in ordered and organized rather than loud and fancy. It provides better educational atmosphere, and symbolize school spirit.[1] By satisfying these two reasons above, students can be more concentrate on their learning and mind developing, which could greatly help fulfill the purpose of education.
Furthermore, statistics has that schools having school uniform policy have seen decreased in crime rate. It was a tragedy that a few years ago in Detroit there was a boy been killed only because someone dislike his brand new, 86 dollar shoes.[2] By wearing uniform, students will be equal even they come from different economy background. They will no longer be laugh or judge at their appearance. And the focus in school will be likely more about which scientific research project are students in rather than who just got the new season, famous branded jacket. And also, students can spend money in a more efficient way such as on school fees, tuition fees or even got better nutrition if they don’t spent their money on the outfits. Nowadays, more and more schools in America now even rise funding of buying uniforms for students who can’t afford the cost.
All in all, wearing uniform keeps the campus in harmony and safe. And also makes student to develop their skills and interest of life in an atmosphere which is free from any problem other than academic accomplishments. By this policy, the purpose of education will be better fulfilled and make learning in school more positive and equal.
[1] from http://www.teachersmind.com/education.htm ---purpose of education
[2] from http://www.123helpme.com ---school uniforms.
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